Wednesday 16 June 2010

Woebegone Woman




She took to her heels and ran into the streets
When her beloved mate was nowhere to be found.
He had ditched her there.
It was truly a nightmare
When the one she loved had betrayed her.

He had said love to her,
He had made love to her.
They were happy for a brief span of time.
She didn't expect this,
She couldn't accept this.
She went in search of a place to hide.

Into a mighty huge palace that dwarfed her frame
She took refuge for the time being.
Like a thief-on-mission on a pitch dark night
She sneaked into the palace without anyone's knowledge.

Her woes multiplied when she had pangs in her womb.
She went nearly mad when she gave birth to quadruplets.
Deprived of food, she was much malnourished,
She didn't have a clue about how to raise her kids.

The granary of the palace was overflowing with food,
She proved her mettle by stealing some for her kids.
The babies made noise when they were strong enough,
The prince of the palace heard it and was greatly shocked.
He found four infants near a heap of food.
Infants so young that they hadn't opened their eyes;
Infants so cute that no one would want to hurt them.

The mom wasn't there, she was hiding due to fright.
The babies were taken and thrown away that night.
A trap was laid to catch the mom,
A trap with tomato and a chunk of cheese.

The mom was caught and let into the streets.
She once again took to her four heels
Followed by her long, pink tail.

16 comments:

Pratibha said...

Nice, Mr. Jerry! You have so much sympathy for your kind. :D

Keerthi Purushothaman said...

super!!!

Keerthi Purushothaman said...

inspired by those baby rats?

Shree said...

Semma kavidhai... but ithu yaara manasula vechu compile pannadhu..??

Vinay Kumaar said...

@Pratibha: He he he.. Thanks.. :)

@Keerthi: Thanks and yeah.. That's what inspired me..

@Shreenesh: Read KP's comment.. :P

This poem was inspired by a real life incident da. This thing happened in my house last month. I even put a photo of those baby rats on FB.. :D

Keerthi Purushothaman said...

that makes you the prince!! kareecta baass? :D

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Anonymous said...

Hey buddy nice one buddy. :)

Anonymous said...

i believe you are the only one who should sympathy for those rats in your whole apartment. :) Really great. :)

SURESH PADMARAJ said...

whoaaa..... i mean awesome.... fuck love ur sense of naaration .... brilliant .. :) good work :):))))))) ....

SURESH PADMARAJ said...

whoaaa..... i mean awesome.... fuck love ur sense of naaration .... brilliant .. :) good work :):))))))) ....

SURESH PADMARAJ said...

whoa... brilliant narration style ...awesome :))

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SURESH PADMARAJ said...

loved it

KC said...

that was one fabulous poem. Your way of narration literally made me believe that it was a human till i read the last line.