Tuesday 19 January 2010

Oh! God..




I said to God,


"I cry and cry
Till my eyes become dry.
I laugh and laugh
Till I get into a fit of cough.
I'm always in the extremes,
That's how I am.

An emotional scene,
Never fails to bring a tear.
The thought of my future
Does invoke my fear.
I'm always in the extremes.
That's how I am.

A beautiful girl
Makes my heart beat fast.
Yet the feeling is shortlived,
It does not really last.
I'm always in the extremes.
That's how I am.

When I love somebody
It's of the highest order.
When I hate somebody
I don't even near their border.
I'm always in the extremes.
That's how I am.

This absence of equilibrium,
Makes me falter a lot,
Revealing to my self,
The bad qualities I've got.

I know this isn't good.
I badly need to change.
This is the umpteenth time I'm saying,
"I badly need to change." "


God replied,


":P"

8 comments:

Periwinkle Mist said...

I love it!!!!
it's awesome
i felt like i'm reading a poem written on me!! :)

Vinay Kumaar said...

Hmmm.. Thanks.. Well what you say is true.. A friend of mine said "I think many could personally connect to it" :D

herooooooooooo said...

good one da...but does it truely reflect u ..i don;t think so..:P

Vinay Kumaar said...

lol.. believe it or not.. I'm like that da :D

SURESH PADMARAJ said...

wow its brilliant .......... dude the ending is awesome./..... i donno if i can use these words in this forum but its fucking good... hahahahhahahaha ....... its gooooooooooddddddddddddddddddd.... lolzzzzz lolzzzzz lolzzzz.....

SURESH PADMARAJ said...

i absolutely enjoyed it ... in the beginning I found it a little generic..... but the ending took it all away.... u know it shows u changed..... not many people will understand this... but ur " PERSPECTIVE " changed... and its nice to see..... :) ..... whether or not u understand

Vinay Kumaar said...

Macha!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This is why I say, "No one understands me as good as Suresh Padmaraj does!!"

:)

Great da!! Cheers!!

Anonymous said...

cool buddy :) i like it.