Listen to me Oh! Brothers,
In you keep your trust.
Binds us the thread of love,
Entwining our souls together.
Revive the glory of Mother Earth,
Try to make her happy.
Yesterday is gone, today's newly born.
Ejaculate the sinful thoughts,
Queued up deep in your mind.
Under that rotten spot,
A beautiful soul you'll find.
Love everyone like your own self,
Imagine a happy world.
Treat no one with bitter scorn.
Yesterday is gone, today's newly born.
Forgive and forget,
Recall the child in you.
All your sorrows you convert,
To happiness that's overdue.
Everywhere can you find love.
Remember only to open your heart.
Nomadic will our lives be,
In this prison-like world,
Till we start sharing love.
Yesterday is gone, today's newly born.
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6 comments:
good one...may be there are scopes of improvement in terms of poetic vocabulary..
i liked it!!!
filled with positive spirits
though its very difficult to follow in real life but always nice to read! :)
Nice ... You can improve lot.. Of course you can do ??? All the best dude...
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Thank you everyone.. :) Well what you have told is true Nirmala Akka. And I guess I'll get it through experience. I just made it a point that this has to be an acrostic poem just like most of my other poems. This is the end product of that. Yes, I can do better.
@Malvika: True.. isko real life mein follow karna mushkil hey.. lekin naamumkin nahi ;)
So Vinay.... this is Arunan.. I saw your blog.. really apreciated... nice work but you have to post more .... also i saw your other blog as well ... hum well just starting stage enna... If you wanna I can guest blog in your blog... Or If you wanna any help in postings or info Feel free to contact me... I ll ready to help you.... Take it easy ... Keep on your good work here
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